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November 28, 2012
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NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D90
Shutter Speed
1/60 second
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F/5.6
Focal Length
28 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Jun 22, 2011, 6:06:06 PM
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Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows
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Solitude by cheslah Solitude by cheslah
Senior portrait for my sister at Ide Adobe State Park.

June 22, 2011
Red Bluff, CA
Nikon D90

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This is a really petty photo and has great color in it. However you cut the roof off the photo at a bad spot. You never want to cut an object in half like that you want to cut it right above it. Don't be afraid to frame your main subject using the natural surroundings around it I.E the wooden hut. All you needed to do was take one step backwards and it would of fit just fine and not take away from the main subject ( the girl). Also a rule of thumb when taking photos of people you don't want to take pictures of the soles of there shoes. Is just considered a little gross and in some cultures showing the souls of your shoes is considered an insult. I would have told her to try and maybe just pose with both legs out front or even photograph her barefoot. Just not with the souls of the shoes facing the lens. You did a great job other then that keep up the good work :)
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
Nice :D
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bear48 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Professional
wonderfully expressive
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HoneyBunny13 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
wow nice love the points of it :)
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cheslah Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Professional Photographer
The umbrella?
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HoneyBunny13 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
no the film i mean lol
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